14 year old girl with some heavy middle school drama.

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6th Jan 2017, 8:12 PM
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monkeyking 6th Jan 2017, 8:12 PM edit delete
monkeyking
..the more you start lookin' for flaws....
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Sam Richardson 8th Jan 2017, 1:57 AM edit delete reply
Sam Richardson
"The more you start looking for mistakes"



I found 25
seers 9th Jan 2017, 9:31 AM edit delete reply
its so cool seeing her in color !!
loving the revamp so far :)
monkeyking 10th Jan 2017, 11:13 PM edit delete reply
monkeyking
thanks! it's pretty nice to show her in color in general anyway. it'll make it easier to differentiate the past and present scenes and make it cooler to look at, imo.
envb 17th Jan 2017, 8:43 PM edit delete reply
envb
omg your use of color is really good! i'm looking forward to see where this goes haha the main characters cute & i hope she makes friends
Mochamonarch 23rd Jan 2017, 5:55 AM edit delete reply
Mochamonarch
Ah, I remember when this was in Homestuck-style. Did you decide to not go with that in the end or?

Anyway, lovely pages so far, I can't wait to read the rest of it!
monkeyking 23rd Jan 2017, 8:12 AM edit delete reply
monkeyking
Thanks! and yeah, it was a hard transition, in simple coloring styles I preferred that style a lot more. But i decided to challenge myself and change it just because the homestuck esque panels were proving too difficult to make in full color. not to mention sites weren't great with providing formats that allowed captions, and i didnt want to just edit them onto the panels.
i do prefer it this way now' i think. ive improved the writing a lot because without a clear narrator stating the obvious ive had to transition every character thought to be more "show, dont tell". it gets the point across a lot more quickly now! (and its easier to read)
Mina 23rd Jan 2017, 3:29 PM edit delete reply
Hey, Did we see you at Dog Ear books on Saturday?
monkeyking 23rd Jan 2017, 3:58 PM edit delete reply
monkeyking
Maaaaaybe.
Mina 27th Jan 2017, 9:03 PM edit delete reply
There were at least two trans* people in the audience...fwiw
monkeyking 29th Jan 2017, 9:58 AM edit delete reply
monkeyking
Including myself, and the two people I came with. We did notice the two people in the audience and wished to talk to them but Nervousness. Maybe if we go there again sometime they'll show up again,, Who Knows!
Mikko 30th Jan 2017, 5:36 PM edit delete reply
Cinematic! Focused. Atmospheric. Almost like watching an animation.